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[her name was Susie!]

YES! ME LIKES MUCH!

Now the serious part. There are two big problems: the snare at 01:35 disrupts the ambient, and the white noise "splash" doesn't sounds like a good ending for this song. Also, at 00:50 there's a synth that sounds interesting but is hardly listenable.

Apart from that... THE SONG IS FUCKING AWESOME!

demon1000 responds:

Thanks Man! And i kinda like how you said your review!

[TheFatRat - Monody (feat. Laura Brehm) -Remix WIP-]

Ok yes it IS the Monody's lead, but you missed some notes and at 00:11 It goes kinda off tempo. But I believe the main problem here is the Delay, put the Delay Feedback a little lower OR use Reverb instead.

And about the "for-now-lol" tag: as Tarian already said, "WIP" means something that's going on seriously, imagine if an Artist posted "hi, look, I drawed a straight line, it's a WIP", tecnicaly it is a WIP buuuuut... Unless you have a group of 100 million people behind you saying "YESSS AWESOME" no one is going to like it.

I love TFR and I love Monody, so I would love a nice remix, please continue it and post another update as soon as you can. XoXo!

BlueAlpha14 responds:

For the life of me I can't get the notes to mix correctly lol. I either shouldn't have it at 130 BPM or I'm using a wrong synth. And yeah, it is a bad WIP. I'll probably end up scrapping the project, as I haven't even touched it since I posted this.

Thanks for the review,
~Alpha

[Royal Fire Remake]

The "guitar solo" which first apprears at 00:43 doesn't fits with the song D: all the other melodyes and sounds mix very well with each other, but you used tons presets :C

I recommend you watching Drum Mixing and Masterting tutorials so each synth sounds better, it's easier than you may tough, trust me :D

Apart from that it's good, it doesn't sounds repetitive (at least for me), so keep it up :3

XoXo

PizzaKiller responds:

Thanks!I'll follow your advice and watch some tutorials:)

[Slowly Fading...]

Yeaah! I totally dig this. I'll only complain about the snare at 1:00 it disturbs the ambient, maybe a different one next time. And the saw stab at 2:28 also comes out of nowhere, but the drops sound awesome.

Keep it up dud!

demon1000 responds:

thanks!

[Orange Lightning]

Well it IS funny XD keep it up, you need to improve a few things such as drums and the fact of using presets, you will get a more personal song if you modify the sounds you use, just moving a simple knot can change everything :D try that.

PizzaKiller responds:

Yeah i know.Drums and percussion are not my strong spot.I will try to improve it though :)

[Pizza Breakfast (Loop)]

Ok ok this has a LOT of potential, BUT! there are a few thingies to be fix'd...

-First of all, the "power up" at 0:26 totally breaks the peace in the song, you should think about something softer.
-The riff, groove, call it as you like it, at 0:38 needs a bass, a powerful bass that would make me bounce my head.
-And the drums could use some serious equalization.

But the armony sounds beautiful and the synths match perfectly. Keep it up.

XoXo

PizzaKiller responds:

Thanks for the review.I know that this loop isn't anything special,but it gave me an idea about how a music must sound.Thanks again for your help and time.

[ToneCrush - How Clever]

Great song! The only thing which I feel wrong is the sub-bass during the riff, it's overshadowing the lead. You can fix that with equalization. But apart form that it's cool!... And yeah, they should add "Trap".

ToneCrush responds:

I am very aware of this problem :). I just had to rush this track because school was about to start. Next track will hopefully not have many minor bugs like this.

[THIS IS A SONG]

The song sounds AWESOME!... exept for one... tiny... little... detail... the drums sound kinda overdriven (for me) but apart from that, Everything is cool! Keep it up

Ravitex responds:

Well, it was one of my goals to make the drums sound clear and heavy, you know what I'm saying?
And of course, to do that, I compressed them.
And I also used the fruity peak controller. For sidechaining. That helped them so sound clear even more.

[Nine Echoes- Friends]

The tune is awesome, DUD! The harmonics sound great, plus you can hear every instrument without effort and still sounds like a solid song. For me, it feels kinda simplistic sometimes, thing which can be arranged with vocals, songs like this go perfect with lyric voices. Apart from that: Great piece, keep it up.

NevoMusic responds:

Thanks a ton for the review! You mentioned vocals would go great with this and I agree. I seem to have a style that fits vocals really well. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

[ToneCrush - Singsong Synths]

Heeeeya this song is GOOD! it would suit nice into a fight animation

ToneCrush responds:

Thanks :D